Thanks to this lecture from Project Projects and this old post from Rob Giampietro, I am now obsessed with pantoums. In a pantoum, the second and fourth lines of the first stanza are repeated as the first and third lines in the following stanza with two new lines introduced in each stanza making for this strange recursive, rhythmic cycle. By the end of this poem, A Date with Robbe-Grillet, I couldn’t stop smiling:
A Date with Robbe-Grillet
What I remember didn’t happen.
Birds stuttering.
Torches huddled together.
The café empty, with no place to sit.
Birds stuttering.
On our ride in the country
the café empty, with no place to sit.
Your hair was like a doll’s.
On our ride in the country
it was winter.
Your hair was like a doll’s
and when we met it was as children.
It was winter
when it rained
and when we met it was as children.
You, for example, made a lovely girl.
When it rained
the sky turned the color of Pernod.
You, for example, made a lovely girl.
Birds strutted.
The sky turned the color of Pernod.
Within the forest
birds strutted
and we came upon a second forest
within the forest
identical to the first.
And we came upon a second forest
where I was alone
identical to the first
only smaller and without music
where I was alone
where I alone could tell the story.
— Elaine Equi